100 WC

October 22, 2016

It was coming! The cruel, crucial creature is here.

TODAY!!! NOW!!! HERE!!! IN LONDON!!!

It happened when the children were learning …

CRASH!!!

It has came the most magnificent yet evil spider, from another galaxy. It was as black as the night sky, and as furry as a mammoth. Suddenly a light green web appeared out of its mouth . Nervously every one ran inside but the creepy cruel creature was not going to stop attacking instead it’s web stuck to the roof .The creature pulled and pulled the roof then flung of the school everyone was terrified they knew he was going to attack.But will he!

One Response to “100 WC”

  1. Mr G, Sheffield, UK (Team 100WC) said:

    What tense and suspenseful story you’ve crafted here Ela. The sharp opening sentences immediately capture the readers attention, as does the capitalisation in the second line. I also see you’ve really thought hard about your vocabulary, choosing descriptive words which paint a vivid picture. AND you managed to include alliteration and similes!
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.



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