100WC

November 19, 2016

It was a perfectly ordinary night (not). Max was coming back from his friends house in the dead of night. Eerie noises were coming out of the dark night sky. He was trembling with fear. Every time he heard a noise panic ¬†filled his body. Without a warning multicoloured lights started to come out of a strange silhouette. Quickly, he sprinted towards his house as fast as a cheetah . His heart was like a wild animal trying to escape a cage. As he ran towards his house, he hadn’t realise the object was following him. Suddenly the object landed and a creature came out and said. “Greetings human of Earth.”

2 Responses to “100WC”

  1. Valentina said:

    Really engaging story Jakub. I liked the way you did ‘ It was a perfectly ordinary night (not)’ the ‘not’ part was my favourite. Nice openers and words. But remember you do a comma after a sentence opener. Great similes you added, too. Like, ‘His heart was like a wild animal trying to escape a cage’. Very good work.

  2. 18kendrick said:

    Hi Jakub a great job on the 100 word challenge. I like it at the start when you did: It was a perfectly ordinary day then you did>(not) also as fast as a cheetah does not really work out with Max. Keep up the good work anyways



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